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Samantha Lynn
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"s a m a n t h a l y n n"
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What I see, you don't.
When I'm electrifying, you're insipid.
What I tend to desire, you abhor.
Loving every second of my life.
Not afraid,
to be me

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Lyrical Limericks

Tue Mar 19, 2013, 1:45 PM


Limericks
"Making Impossible, I'm Possible"

:wave: Hey everyone, are you ready to tackle the impractical and make it possible!? Writing such a form of poetry is very challenging and developing a humorous one is seemingly impossible. Albeit, note that, "nothing is impossible, the word itself says "'I'm possible."'  

Background Information:


What is a limerick?

"A limerick is a short verse in a well-defined form which we'll look at soon. Most limericks are (or are meant to be) funny or silly. Many are risque. Some are downright obscene. Very few are serious, as the form isn't equipped to carry deeper thoughts or emotions."

Let's break down this complicated definition with a few key points! The ingredients to the recipe!
- the verse form
- the rhyme
- the pulse
- the rhythm

What is NOT a limerick?
"The Anglo-Saxon
brays like a klaxon
but the words of the Celt
are deeply felt."

Why? you may ask. Look at the form! Where is the rhyming pattern, the rhythm...the pulse!?!

Let's Begin Writing A Limerick: Some Information You Need To Know



A limerick is a five-line poem written with one couplet and one triplet.

A couplet is a two-line rhymed poem

A triplet would be a three-line rhymed poem. 

To help you understand the beat and the rhyme say the following limericks out loud and clap to the rhythm.

"A flea and a fly in a flue

Were caught, so what could they do?

Said the fly, "Let us flee."

"Let us fly," said the flea.

So they flew through a flaw in the flue."

- Ogden Nash


Extra Information About The Lovely Limerick: :w00t:

 

:pointr: Limericks are meant to be funny. 

:pointr: They often contain hyperbole, onomatopoeia, idioms, puns, and other figurative devices. 

:pointr: The last line of a good limerick contains the PUNCH LINE!

:pointr: Some people say that the limerick was invented by soldiers returning from France to the Irish town of Limerick in the 1700's.


Sound easy, huh? :horny:

Here's the very last item that needs to be added to your list! Let's dig into this rhyming pattern in a little more detail.

Limericks are written with an anapestic tetrameter, "...which is a poetic meter that has four anapestic metrical feet per line. Each foot has two unstressed syllables followed by a stressed syllable..."

"An anapaest is a metrical foot used in formal poetry."


The Verse Form:

The limerick has five lines. Lines one, two & five are the same length as each other. Lines three & four match each other, but are shorter than one, two & five. 

So far, so good, but how long is long and how short is short?

How to rhyme, the pattern, practice, and more!

The rhyme pattern is AABBA - lines 1, 2 and 5 contain 3 beats and RHYME, and lines 3 and 4 have two beats and RHYME.

(All the A's rhyme together and all the B's rhyme), here is an example:

A= Nigh   A= Fly   B= Stiff   B= Cliff   A= Why

The Pulse:


Lines 1, 2 & 5 have exactly three strong beats that you can clap or tap your foot to. They also have a fourth silent beat at the end of the line, which you feel, but don't hear, before you move on to the next line. 

Lines 3 & 4 have exactly two strong beats, but no silent beat at the end. So the pulse is like this:

clap clap clap (duh)
clap clap clap (duh)
clap clap
clap clap
clap clap clap (duh)

Every limerick follows this pulse. A verse that doesn't conform isn't necessarily wrong, or bad, but it just isn't a limerick.


The Rhythm:


Limericks are always written with a triplet rhythm. To understand this, compare the words camera and football. Read this aloud and you'll hear the difference:

camera camera camera camera football football football football

So, the triplet (camera) rhythm is always used in limericks. The duplet (football) rhythm is not. Now apply camera to the regular clapping pulse, and you get this:

a camera camera man (duh)

a camera camera man (duh)

a camera man

a camera man

a camera camera man (duh)

And that is the basic verse form, pulse and rhythm of every limerick. Slight variations are normal and inevitable, but again, unless your verse conforms to that underlying pattern, it simply isn't a limerick.


The Rhyme:

This is the easiest part. Lines 1, 2 & 5 (the longer lines) rhyme with each other. Lines 3 & 4 (the short lines) rhyme together. Because limericks are very short, the rhyming needs to be good! 

This website is very handy!


A COLLECTION OF WONDERFUL LIMERICKS FROM DEVIANTART

A Silly LimerickThere once was a young man named Hugh

Who found a rather large frog in his shoe.

"Oh no!" he cried out

And started jumping about

And squished the poor frog into goo.
  LimerickI'm writing a poem about nothing;
I'm really quite bored anyway.
As I write this short verse,
I think something worse:
I've wasted a minute of your day.
  LimerickThere once was a cannibal named Orange,
Who put all his victims in cold storage.
George said, "Hey, that doesn't rhyme!"
But there was no time!
For George was soon made into porridge.
  Math LimerickA dozen, a gross, and a score,
Plues three times the square root of four,
Divided by seven,
Plues five times eleven,
Is nine squared, and not a bit more
  Layton and the LimerickThere once was a man who loved puzzles

  That made everyone else so confuzzled

               Wherever he went

         His brainpower was spent

And the townsfolk demanded him muzzled
  LOL at that Limerick Contest
Christian Bale viewed his reflection with a grin
He was covered from big toe to chin
Halloween was his fave
And sweets he did crave
Yup, the 'Dark Knight' would soon ride again

With pumpkin-bucket, he stood at the door
He had rung this doorbell twice before
His Batman costume was a hit
But a rather tight fit
He'd already eaten candies galore

The little kids were all up in a riot
The big kid in the Bat-suit was a pirate
He was collecting every treat
Down their little street
It was time for the Bat-dude to 'buy-it'

Christian heard an internal alarm bell
And finally the other shoe fell
Little monsters converged
Their sugarless


Classic Limericks

"I wish that my room had a floor!

I don't so much care for a door,

But this crawling around

Without touching the ground

Is getting to be quite a bore!"

- Gelett Burgess


"There was a young girl from Madras

Who had a most beautiful ass

Not rounded and pink

As so you may think

But gray, with long ears, and ate grass."

- Anonymous


"There was a young fellow of Wheeling

Endowed with such delicate feeling

When he read on the door,

"Don't spat on the floor"

He jumped up and spat on the ceiling!

- American version






I need to thank the following website sources that helped me write this blog entry:

The Limerick Recipe: Verse, Rhyme, Rhythm, and Pulse

Limerick Beat: Clap Your Way To Learning







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