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brutal honesty

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Have you described  y o u r s e l f  to the thousands -
Hesitant, but completely honest? W h o  I think I am
and what I  s o u n d  like are  t w o  different things.

S  T  O  P  and think for a second and say,
who are  y o u,  are you happy with what
you  d e c l a r e  yourself to be? W o r d s -
you  t h i n k  they describe  w h o  you are;
but            are            they              enough?

Be  h o n e s t.
are you  w h o
you want to be?
O R  are  y o u,
j u s t      y o u ?

False declarations lead to malicious truths that  w o u n d.
It burns - hurts like a  k n i f e  to the flesh, but you know
in the end   h o n e s t y   will feel like a numbing narcotic
that eases the  a c h e  and lets the gash become a  s c a r :
where the   p a i n   is gone, but the reason that it is there
is                                     n e v e r                              forgotten.
true to myself.

this is an older poem that I dug up from the graveyard.

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2014 (c) samantha lynn / amour-raven
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lovedontdie's avatar
Love the poem .... Food for thought.... Honesty is not received kindly in my world..